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英語作文的評語示例

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導語:英語作文,是指用英語針對某一內容寫出一篇文章,是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型,也是考生最容易失分的題型。下面是本站小編爲您整理的英語作文的評語,供您參考和借鑑。

英語作文的評語

簡單交待時間,地點和結果…

a brief introduction of the time, place and results ...

語言簡練,規範,開篇吸引人.

Concise language, norms, begins to attract people.

…以…開頭,較有新意.前因後果娓娓道來.

... In order to ... First, a new, Weiweidaolai antecedents and consequences.

開篇簡明扼要,精煉有序;重點描述…給人留下深刻印象.

The opening be concise and to the point, refining orderly; key description ... Very impressive.

以景喻情,開頭頗有新意;倒敘開頭,渲染意境.

To view the metaphor, beginning quite new; flashback beginning, rendering the mood.

開頭直奔主題,也是一種寫法.

At the beginning of straight to the subject, is also a kind of way.

開頭很活潑.擬人化手法的運用使開頭顯得活潑,

Beginning very lively. Personification makes beginning is lively,

反問句開頭,吸引讀者.

Asked at the beginning of a sentence, to attract readers.

開頭直奔主題,讓人一目瞭然.

At the beginning of straight to the subject, let people stick out a mile.

開頭點題,用詞很吸引人.

At the beginning of the theme, with the word is very attractive.

場面和氣氛描寫爲文章增色不少;

scene and the atmosphere for the description of grace;

將…改成…更合適些,

Will be ... Change into ... Some more appropriate,

自然承上啓下,細節描寫突出人物品質,令人感動.

Natural bridge, details of outstanding character, moving.

敘事中夾寫景,以已度人,將心比心.

In his narration clip, Yiyiduren, feel for others.

擬人化語言使文章更顯得生動活潑.

Anthropomorphic language make the article more appear to be lively and vivid.

外形描寫十分有趣,突出了…的可愛.介紹中融入了自己的思想,有感染力.

…對精彩地方進行簡單描述;點面結合

... On the exciting place for a simple description; Dianmianjiege

簡單介紹情況,自然過渡到下一段;

Brief introduction of situation, natural transition to the next paragraph;

情境描寫調動起懸念;

Situation description arouse suspense;

充分運用語言,動作,心理描寫,使事情具體,生動.

Make full use of the language, action, psychological description, make something specific, vivid.

簡要敘述前因,進行鋪墊.

Brief description of antecedents, to pave the way.