英語作文之低碳生活

Low carbon life 低碳生活

構思點撥

圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他爲什麼總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節約用電。但是，我們如果從更宏觀，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環保的生活方式。因此本文的內容和結構可如下：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來。

思維拓展

環保話題，例如節約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯繫，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。

高分範文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②.

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month.

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature.

佳作妙譯

如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發上舒適地睡覺，電視還開着。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。

這種現象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣於做什麼事情都開着電視，實際上並不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環境，實現可持續發展。根據統計數據，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4. 17千克的碳排放量。

作爲對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公衆中推廣並普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節開始。我們必須要改變爲了獲得短期的快速經濟發展，犧牲長期的環境健康的做法，轉向發展綠色經濟、循環經濟以及低碳經濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現社會發展與自然有序發展之間的和諧。

名師點評

① is sleeping soundly： 熟睡，也可以表達爲 A boy is fast asleep.“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa， with the television on， when his mother comes and turns off the television for him， blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again.

該句主幹結構是：A boy is sleeping， when his mother comes and turns off the television.

這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發生（正在睡覺），突然發生了另一件事（媽媽來關電視）。

“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping， while the television is on. 也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping， forgetting to turn off the television.

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。

圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入爲主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。

③ are used to doing： 習慣於做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet：這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章裏面的句型，引用的標準到位。

一般而言，環保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。

中國人飲食的改變 Changes in Peoples Diet in China

The period of 1986 1990 saw great changes in the diet of the Chinese. Grain, which used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role. On the other hand, the meat and fish has increased rapidly. The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. First, people are much wealthier than before. With higher income,they can afford to buy good foods. Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. Lack of certain amount of meat or milk,for example, will result in poor health. Finally, owing to the eeonomic reform, meat, chicken, fish and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. For all these reasons, what was formerly called the basket of vegetables has. To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China. We believe that as long as the effort continuous in reform and opening to the outside world, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future.

在人民在中國飲食變化

內容：在人們的飲食變化China1.1986 - 1990年期間中國人飲食的巨大變化。2。飲食變化的原因。3。總之... ...在1986-1990年期間，看到了中國飲食的巨大變化。糧食，這曾是在中國大多數人的主要食物，而現在，同樣重要的作用。另一方面，肉和魚的迅速增加。飲食習慣的變化，可以比重由許多因素。首先，人們比以前更富有。由於收入較高，他們可以買得起的食品。另一個因素是，人們已經認識到均衡飲食的重要性，對他們的健康。缺乏對肉類或奶類一定數額，例如，會導致健康不佳。最後，由於eeonomic改革，肉，雞，魚和牛奶，這已是過去稀少，是大批量生產。由於所有這些原因，是原稱爲 蔬菜籃子 的。總括來說，無關緊要，這些變化看起來，他們是在中國改善經濟狀況的跡象。我們相信，只要不斷努力，改革開放和對外開放，將在人們的飲食習慣，今後更大的變化。

About Wenchuan earthquake 關於汶川大地震

Wenchuan, a small city, was destroyed by the earthquake. Many people were buried underground. Many houses were collapsed.

The army comes to help people save some people who were buried underground. People said thanks to them.

The force of the earthquake is very big. But people don't afraid it. People around the world contributed money to Wenchuan. We wish Wenchuan will become more and more beautiful.

What an unbelievable thing it is! Their great spirits showed the powerful life vitality of humans! However, they must keep fighting against the death schools were destroyed and there were many students and teachers who left us forever. Sadness, hopelessness and different kinds of danger spreaded out here and there!

But ,fortunately ,love is around us :the Communist party helps us ,the army helps us ,the people all over the world help us offer us with money ,goods, love and so on !For example ,li Lian ji, a warm-hearted man ,offered us with 20 million yuan !

With the help of the such a large love, we will over come the damage of the earthquake and face our beautiful future!

汶川，一個小城市，被地震毀了。很多人被埋在地下。許多房子倒塌了。軍隊來幫助人們節省一些人埋在地下。人們對他們說謝謝。地震的力量是非常大的。但人們並不害怕它。世界各地的人們爲汶川捐款。我們希望汶川會越來越漂亮。這是一個不可思議的事情！他們的偉大精神，顯示了強大的生命活力的人！然而，他們必須繼續戰鬥反對死刑。很多學校被摧毀，有許多學生和老師誰永遠離開了我們。悲傷，絕望和不同種類的危險分散在這裏和那裏！但是，幸運的是，愛是在我們周圍：共產黨幫助我們，幫助我們的軍隊，全世界的人都幫助我們。他們爲我們提供了用金錢，貨物，愛情等等！例如，李蓮姬，一個熱心的人，給我們提供了20000000元人民幣！在這樣大愛的幫助下，我們將在今後的地震破壞和麪對我們的美好未來！

世界森林日The World Forest Day

In 1971, the Spanish naturalists suggested that we should set up a day to call on people to protect the forest and make the full use of it. Then the representatives of the naturalists from all over the world decided that March 21 is the world forest day. In some countries, this day is also deemed as the tree-planting day. After 4 decades, the world forest day is more than a day to call on people to protect the forest, making people realize the relations between human being and the forest is also the aim of the forest day.

在1971年，西班牙的自然學家提出人們應該設立一個節日來號召民衆保護森林，並盡其所用。然後來自世界各地的自然學家的.代表們決定把每年的3月21日定爲世界森林日。在某些國家，這一天也被認定爲是植樹節。40年過去了，世界森林日也不僅僅是號召大家保護森林的節日，它也是幫助人們意識到人類與森林關係的節日。

It’s generally accepted that the forest has the functions of cooling off the global temperature, refreshing the air, preserving soil and water, protecting the nature links and so on. The forest is also the key to solve the severe environmental problems. In American Indian’s cultural, the local people believe that the forest raise up the sky. If the forest disappears, the sky will collapse, and the living beings would die out. With the rapid development of human society, the forest coverage rate is decrease. While the demands of the woods and papers products keep increasing. It can hardly meet the needs of human beings. Everyday, countless trees are cutting down to make various paper products. In order to make more money, people destroy the forests, and there comes different kinds of problems. For instance, soil erosion, global warming, glaciers melting, and sea level rising. The forest is so important to this planet. We should do something to protect the forest.

人們普遍認爲森林具有降溫、淨化空氣、保護水土和維持自然鏈等功能。森林也是解決嚴峻環境問題的關鍵。在美洲的印第安人文化中，當地人認爲樹木撐起了天空，如果森林消失，那麼天空就會塌陷，世界上的生物就會隨之滅亡。隨着人類社會的快速發展，森林覆蓋率在逐漸下降。而人們對木材及紙製品的需求量日益增長，所砍伐的樹木難以滿足人們的需求。每一天，不計其數的樹木被做成各種各樣的紙製品。爲了賺更多的錢，人們摧毀了森林，然而問題也隨之而來。例如：水土流失、氣候變暖、冰川融化、海平面上升等等。森林對我們的地球來說如此的重要，我們應該好好保護它。

First, stop cutting down the forest blindly. If we really have to, plant more trees. Second, the government should do something to enhance the people’s awareness of forest protection. Last but not least, we can reduce the use of paper, such as avoid using disposable paper goods. Protect the forest is to protect ourselves. Without the forest, we can not live on the earth either.

首先，我們要停止盲目的砍伐森林。如果不得不這樣做，那就種植更多的樹木。其次，政府宣傳森林的重要性，以此提高普通民衆保護森林的意識。最後，我們應該減少紙質用品，例如避免使用一次性的紙製品。保護森林就是保護我們自己。沒有了森林，我們也不能存活在地球之上。

經濟全球化對世界的影響The impact of economic globalization on the world

Economic globalization benefits the world immensely, especially the prosperity of tourism. As a result,the cultures, languages and customs in the minorities are notmysterious to the world any more, which should be attributed to thepopularity of tourism. It is a consensus that tourism canstimulate the economic development in a region, since tourism playsan important role in the acceleration of the improvement ofservice, such as transportation, accommodation, catering and othermarginal business. With a view to attracting more tourists, theminority regions have to consider how to improve their image andservice, during the course of which they can have an overall planto promote the status of their region. Nowadays, many people travelfor minority regions to satisfy their curiosity, where they canhave unexpected findings. Furthermore, tourism can strengthenthe interflow of cultures and traditions between the people indifferent regions. Trips to minority countries and regions renderpeople a lot of new cultures and customs, which, presumably, havebeen handed down from old ages and enjoyed very splendid erly, people can only get some segments about the minoritiesfrom videos, films and other incomplete descriptions on books. Now,tourists have more opportunities to communicate or even live withthe minority people and acquire first-hand knowledge about them,which provides the researchers with a lot of authentic information. Admittedly, tourism damages thenatural environment in some minority regions and spoils thepeaceful life of them to some degree due to their frequentactivities in the minority regions, the environment beingdeteriorated in some regions, which is not what we expected. Generally, the popularity of Englishand tourism brings more advantages than damage to the minorityregions, since it has enriched people’s knowledge and widened theirhorizons. But meanwhile, we should be on the alert for the damageto the minority regions and take effective means to tackle theproblems tourism arouses.

經濟全球化對世界的好處，特別是旅遊業的繁榮。因此，文化，在少數民族語言和風俗習慣是神祕的世界，這要歸功於大衆化旅遊。這是一個共識，旅遊能夠促進一個地區經濟的發展起着重要的作用，因爲旅遊業在改善服務的加速度，如交通，住宿，餐飲和othermarginal業務。爲了吸引更多的遊客，民族地區必須考慮如何提高自己的形象和服務，在教學過程中他們能有一個全面的計劃來促進他們的區域中的地位。如今，許多人travelfor民族地區來滿足他們的好奇心，他們在那裏會有意外的發現。此外，旅遊可以加強人們之間的交流，不同區域的文化和傳統。旅行對少數國家和地區renderpeople很多新的文化和風俗，這，大概，是從舊時代流傳下來的、非常輝煌的歷史。以前，人們只能得到關於minoritiesfrom視頻段，在書籍、電影和其他不完整的描述。現在，旅遊者有更多的交流機會，甚至可以與少數民族進行交流，並獲得他們的第一手知識，這爲研究者提供了很多真實的信息。誠然，在一些少數民族地區旅遊的損害會和平生活的他們在少數民族地區由於其frequentactivities一定程度的自然環境，環境beingdeteriorated在一些地區，這不是我們所期望的。一般來說，英語，旅遊的普及帶來的損害比地區更具有優勢，因爲它豐富了人們的知識，拓寬了視野。但同時，我們必須對對少數民族地區採取解決問題的有效手段，旅遊引起警惕。

生態環境 the balance of nature